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[Its Him!]

I bet you like him!!

Sx1grl responds:

YES :3

[Manifest your spectre: Pilot chapter (6/6)]

And here I thought you were opening up to a whole series!

Regardless, you've done great work setting this all up, loading up on that info without dragging the reader through dumps of explanations. The way you've presented the setting, we can tell what all these exotic concepts are without needing even an aside to say "this works like this".

(Except for that phone bit~)

GoofballPaul responds:

Thank you very much! I do wanna make this into a series, it's just... that can't be my priority right now. Perhaps I'll start working on that a few years from now.

About the way I gave exposition on how this world works, thank you a lot for your feedback! It's very reassuring, I was worried I front-loaded the comic with too much exposition!

I intend to, in the future, make a proper "chapter 1" which reuses almost all of these pages, but adds new ones before these and changes some of the dialogue, with that I hope to explain a lot of things better and over more panels, so the exposition doesn't get overbearing. In general I already have a lot of ideas about how to improve this. :D

[Easter bunny]

For a moment, I thought that was the Lloyd Bunny

LucasGothic663 responds:

It's just a similar facial hair style but I see what you mean hehe X3

[Floofy Ralsei]

I have a friend who absolutely ADORES your Ralsei arts, so consider this a compliment from him too.

Sx1grl responds:

Thank you!! that means alot!!

[Little fox ^^]

I can think of a fox you might like

[OC: Lucas (With info about him ^w^)]

Really feeling his fashion! I like that we've both got that "dark but perky" thing going on too.

LucasGothic663 responds:

Thank you so much! ^-^

[Feelings]

Honestly pickles straight from the jar is quite a good snack. You also don't need to worry about the extra calories, unless they are the sugary kind!

Sx1grl responds:

i just have normal dill and ye they are good i also have them with penut butter and bread sometimes which most people dont like for some reasion its very good tbh XD

[Ralsei fanart]

I LOVE the way you interpreted him into your design style!

Sx1grl responds:

glad you love it ><

[Wicked Stepford]

That's a clever way to go about this. I like what you came up with!

Thetageist responds:

Thank you! You should try it, it's fun!

[[2023] [c] DRaGoNoz]

Out of the corner of my eye I thought that was Wyndbain's dragon maker.